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sweet to my swaying
come home to my wine –
a long way
forever
I can’t seem
to find
the note that you left
to the places
we lay –
would save us another
for falling away
surrendered
one sunday –
as secrets retold
to lie awake monday
with dreams taking hold
couldn’t be
what’s the matter –
can’t you see I don’t care
what of hurts
were just waiting –
a silence to share
as lifetimes made over
in moments of bliss
a note said you’re going
my touch
said you’d miss
a beginning just started
is waiting – who knows
what love
never mentioned
– is rain
to your soul
. . .

feels like forever in a dream
is on hold…waiting to pick up and continue
as though time was never lost….
my take on it anyways….
Beautiful Bobbie…
Love to you always…
)0(
just me
Time is never lost, Maryrose. Always, we are in the places we loved……there our true immortality. Love is our connection to everything past and everything yet to be…… I envision myself as a scarlet ribbon tying it all together. Maybe you’re the blue one……. On second thought, I’m sure. I love you, Maryrose. ~ All my heart, Bobbie
lovely mesmerizing lines
Thank you, Soumyav. Truly, I am blessed by your visit. 🙂 Have a wonderful day! ~ Ever, Bobbie
Your words are like the sweeping wind that caresses the beach, Bobbie. Just beautiful. x
Thank you, Angela. If they find you, they are indeed blessed. You touch my soul with your tender kindness. ~ Always love, Bobbie
Sometimes it feels as though it just isn’t poetry without rhyme … This is a beautifully woven story, the flow of the reading, like notes to a song, causes as much thought as do the words …
Thank you, Peter. I know what you mean, and yet other times, rhyme only seems to get in the way. 🙂 Thank you (again). ~ Much love, Bobbie
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