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further than most
were daring adventure
and wandered I more
to those moments
of flight
truth held by silence
together (this ever)
and yet for the soul –
to remember me now
as writing to places
undone by the rhyme
and what was the vow
worth holding in trust
awaiting again
this reason to come
of somewhere
a life
never planned
awaits in the fold
of venus to clovers –
as love without need
for a time
or division of meaning
what of mine yours –
as the face
now framed
by the sun
in the dawn
where my dreams
are gathered to seed
and I –
but a pillow of stars
Beautiful. I really love that last stanza. Great job!
Wow! You did it again. I fumbled with that last verse for the longest time (although it was the first to be written) unsure of the wording, and absolutely positive that the meaning would be lost. You and Seb are proof enough that I was mistaken, and for that, I am profoundly grateful! Thank you, David……….you are a true blessing to me. ~ Love ever, Bobbie
yes. A wonder of patience, measurement and precision.
As most things are………. 😀 Thank you, Seb. Again, your presence with my words is more than I can assign words to. Thanks hardly seems sufficient, but it is. Truly. ~ Love, Bobbie
I loved the last verse! gorgeous! beautiful poem….Love..
Thank you, dearest Linda……… Always, your klindness is a welcome voice to my soul. ~ Much love always, Bobbie
I was listening to a song by “Santana”, sung by Leon Patillo, “You are a River”, and your words danced along side the rythmns hand in hand, each note. You post is ever as beautiful as His song…awesome poem Bobbie!
I love that song, Wendell………and for a moment, I could have sworn I heard your voice. Thank you for every kindness you give. ~ Much love, Bobbie
Yes, as the others, the soft loveliness of the last lines touched me.
…as your light touches us all, dearest Dee. But especially me…. 😉 Thank you. Love you, Bobbie