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frosted
white of winter leaves
silence in the kitchen
where cluttered there with dishes
on the floor
survivors
of an evening past
how slow our recognition
of places held
before
the coffee spilt
splattered
to the ashes –
crystal cigarettes
are careful in their telling
of our lies
maybe
when the sun is poured
new across the vinyl –
we’ll wander here
to pick the pieces up
forgotten how it hurt
curses now gone colder –
tears have dried
beneath
the habit’s stain
. . .

I tried really hard to find a favorite line. I couldnt, because I loved them all
……..o, I’m so glad……..this was an experiment to see whether I could tell a story without telling much of anything……. 😉 Thank you, Deana. ~ My love, Bobbie
Fantastic!!!! OMG — really truly loved this — it’s like a complex drama without any details – with tons of intrigue and mystery …. like the setting or prelude to a great film… Brava!! x RL
O, wow, Robyn. I wasn’t expecting that. 🙂 When I started, I was thinking about the old adage in writing – show but don’t tell (or maybe it’s tell but don’t show)…… 🙂 Thank you! ~ Much love, Bobbie