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of those who would know me
the worst would allow –
and pages I can’t bare remember
the last time forget me –
the first one to stay
past the rise of tomorrow
on the thought of today
when the clothes
needed washing
and rent was come due
were fields needing more
that what planting
would do
I begged
for a savior –
a man among men
would come as a season
to know me again
would wake as the lantern
was burning its last
to relive every moment
of loving
was passed
to the vault that would stay
on a cord ’round my heart
a memory of comfort
wishes and lace –
wrapped in another
surrendered to grace
as we were
to forever –
every promise let go
let the crops burn
and weevils take hold –
more here
than heaven –
a paradise thrives
in moments eternity waits
share me the wonder
of morning reflection –
and a lantern
left long by the gate
a memory of comfort
wishes and lace –
wrapped in another
surrendered to grace
as we were
to forever –
every promise let go
let the crops burn
and weavils take hold
Beauty but then the little weavils taking hold, really liked that stanza in particular Bobbie. xx
😉 Me too, Vanessa………… Yep – after writing it, I wondered if people not familiar with bo weevils would know what they were…….. but thanks for the comment because I see now that I misspelled it. 🙂 I am so so glad you liked it. ~ Love you, Me
very touching, my heart hurting some from the read, but that is good; you did a great job with this one. all elements terrific, love it, Your friend, Linda
Thanks, Linda. I wasn’t so sure about this one………… I suspect my cornflakes were luring me away at the end. Love you and thank you. ~ Always, Bobbie
You always share such slices of life when you write…yet in the end the words are ever embracing, ever touching, and every loving…beautiful poem Bobbie!
….dearest Wendell, I’m so glad you see right through me. 😉 Love you, Me
I love the ending — a lantern left long by the gate, the flame kept burning after everything’s been said and done. Love, Dee
You know…….. 😉 I’m not at all surpised you understand. Thank you, Dee. All my love to you, Bobbie