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becoming, bliss, cherokee, connection, destiny, dreams, faith, grace, life, living, love, nature, passion, reason, relationship, spirit, truth, woman, wonder

he saved for her the sunset
he’d been painting
(all his life)
as crimson bled to orange
purple green –
a lover’s rite
reflections of the day
he found her standing
near the shore
held her (without speaking)
brushed a dress
of finest oil
silken sable gold
steady made her curls
to steal his pride
she came to him
each night as was created
other worlds –
beneath the canvas
(life beyond this one)
he heard the shutters heave
the rafters roar
calmed again the artist’s storm
he found the solace (her)
meadow green
with silver shoes
and palest pink (her stutter)
took his breath
and held him close
in pools of cocoa bean
he knew her
every (blush of) imperfection
had painted her in places
(always new)
this world of his
much larger now –
twilight dreams confessing
oil come to life in midnight hues
where sunset fell
in shadows (she is waiting)
evermore –
brushed against his memory
sapphire blue
A wonderful concept, very engaging and loved the imagery.Lots of lines to love here so hard to be specific about one in particular!
…….knowing you love it is all I need to know…………and more than enough to make me smile. Love you. Thanks, Vanessa. – Love, Bobbie
It’s marvelous how love is portrayed as a painting of many colors, each color symbolic of something special. I also like the third person omniscient point of view for this poem.
Thank you, Dee…….. As I wrote this, I wondered whether she was real to anyone but him……..but then again, I sometimes let my imagination run ahead…… 🙂 You’re an angel. Thank you, my dear friend. ~ Love you, B