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forgive of me
a time before
when leaving broke
my heart
before the spring
when as a blossom
burst
to decorate your garden
with perfume
once was mine
before the chase
of dew into the light
pardon me
this lowly salve
of choices to confuse
emotion
spent
and what for love
was done –
as places of your dreaming
where I am unafraid
of longing meant to soothe
this emptiness
as quiet to
an awkward stance
thought you knew me when
by storms awoke
remembered not
my name
forgive of me
this dreadful verse
kept my soul from staying –
the taking back
of love
I meant to give
. . .
Ah, but ’tis not a dreadful verse, darlin girl. A wee bit heavy on the sad side, but not without its own bit o’ merit. ‘Twas nicely done! …..xo
Himself
ahhh, but sad is surely but a moment………with reference always to the joy……… Sweeter for the taking. Thank you!
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Thank you, my precious friend. xo ❤
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so many thoughts races in circles no words to catch and give them a voice
Beautiful within each sigh of sadness Bobbie
I love this 🙂
Take Care…You Matter…
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just me
O, Maryrose, there are thousands of words just waiting to become sound. Until then, they are held as tiny birds to our beating, a remembrance of every good we’ve known. Thank you, my beautiful friend. I am honored when my words find you. ❤
Love growns when it falls on fertile ground… ❤ Xxxxxx
It does……….the more room we give it, the greater it becomes………..beyond our ability to tell……….we carry it and it carries us………. ❤
‘The taking back of love I mean’t to give.’ There is always such elegance in the way your lines flow together with their message of selfless love! I really love this poem Bobbie!
Even as you say that, Wendell, I see that hint of sadness that others reference here – for surely there is sadness in ever taking back that which was given with love……….. We cannot take it back; else, it was never really love. Thank you…….for reminding me of what we both know……..