as autumn leaves
at last are still –
beneath the warmth of summer’s breath
as stiff the golden blades
to frost –
a halo to a frozen crest
circles brown betray the bark
with counted dreams
of long ago –
an evening shorter
than has been
my page alight with sunset glow
envisions now –
another spring
beyond the death of wondering
of what was meant
by signs unseen –
the search for answers
(now I know)
were here when came
this fragile choice
as maples sail from destiny
apart from arms
become the wind
beyond the snow –
anew begin
maple sails
26 Monday Mar 2012
Posted in Poetry
nice ending “anew begin”- have to like that
Thank you, Dean. You are a kind soul.
Beautiful poem! I love how you develop your poetic syntax.
And like Dean, I like the anastrophe at the end. Wonderful work or art!
Thank you, dear one. Your kindness warms my heart.
I don’t know all “the parts”, techniques and such–I just know how it makes me feel and I love the words you have written here. Beautiful.
🙂 I love that response. I don’t know either, Jeannie. I tend to not focus much on count, tempo, form and rhyme…….I just write down everything my heart and soul dares tell me!!! Somehow, it works………. Thank you so much!